Describe how Gales attitude about running away with Katniss change over time. What effect does this change in [point of view] have on the mood of the story.
Chapter 7
When Katniss and Gale are in the woods, Katniss brings up how she wants to runaway. At first Gale is excited and ready to go. "He steps in and i feel myself lifted off the ground. The rool spins, and i have to hook my arms around Gales neck to brace myself. He's laughing, happy." Until they start talking about Peeta does he get mad. He starts asking Katniss if she'd still go without Peeta. Then she lets it slide that a rebellion is starting to ignite in district 8 which causes him to be totally against running away. So, by the end of their conversation Gale is mad at Katniss and storms off.
Chapter 7
When Katniss and Gale are in the woods, Katniss brings up how she wants to runaway. At first Gale is excited and ready to go. "He steps in and i feel myself lifted off the ground. The rool spins, and i have to hook my arms around Gales neck to brace myself. He's laughing, happy." Until they start talking about Peeta does he get mad. He starts asking Katniss if she'd still go without Peeta. Then she lets it slide that a rebellion is starting to ignite in district 8 which causes him to be totally against running away. So, by the end of their conversation Gale is mad at Katniss and storms off.
All of your ideas are right, but you have some minor proofreading errors. Read your response out loud and fix the parts that don't sound right. You also have a couple of capitalization and punctuation errors that need to be fixed.
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